Almost a Mile Below South Dakota continued

So I decided to write more on this because within our class discussion I have more things that I was thinking of.


There is so much techy and sciency-y lingo that it was distracting from easy readability. Sentences like the following: " the entire assemblage will eventually contain 31 gallons of –154°F liquid. xenon—the medium that will actually detect the dark matter— so precision is essential. "
was such a distraction because I felt lost with the constant usage of terms like that.


It was my least favorite article that we have read because it seemed like weak writing, I can not identify the exact thing that made me feel that way but it was jus